Drowning…

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Is it only water
Which drowns you
Or are there others
…….

Imagine a dark,still pool
Of water….
Hidden in plain sight
……..

When time comes
It rushes out,chilling every cell
of your body
……

You cling on to every
Possible support but the dry air
Burns the heart of you
…….

Cold heat, light dark
Contrasting elements
Combine to bring you down
…….

Seeking a voice…
And hearing Silence fall.

Your heart is like this pond
After a very long spell of rain ,
Overflowing and spilling all over
And drowning you all over again!

Inspired by my favorite writer!

Image:from internet

©~S
All posts are written by S unless otherwise stated.
To contact the writer drop an email at taralight26@gmail.com

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33 comments

  1. Sandy · March 25

    To think, I was cofuesnd a minute ago.

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  2. Imran Ali · August 24, 2015

    We are drowning in information but starved for knowledge

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  3. itsmayurremember · August 23, 2015

    Inspired by the favorite author: who is the favorite?

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    • Unraveling mystery · August 23, 2015

      It’s Haruki Murakami…Who’s urs?
      -S

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      • itsmayurremember · August 23, 2015

        I like everything I read. I am inspired by every writer’s writing style and story.

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      • Unraveling mystery · August 23, 2015

        its true for me too…but sometimes you stumble upon someone whose writing just strikes the right chords …and makes you feel connected!
        -S

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      • itsmayurremember · August 23, 2015

        BTW, any book suggestions by that author?

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      • Unraveling mystery · August 23, 2015

        My personal favorite is “Kafka on the Shore ” and “1Q84″…but you can always read the others before you decide for yourself!
        -S

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      • itsmayurremember · August 23, 2015

        If I ever get my hands on either of the two I will surely devour them
        *No i am not that hungry, it is just an expression 😛 *

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      • Unraveling mystery · August 23, 2015

        hehehe…i am sure that these books will satisfy your hunger!
        -S

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      • itsmayurremember · August 23, 2015

        I just your blog image/icon. You a Doctor Who fan?

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      • Unraveling mystery · August 23, 2015

        yep…a very big and crazy one! “Everywhere and anywhere,
        Every star that ever was
        where do you want to start?”
        ohh how I wish for some time lord too ask me this!
        -S

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      • itsmayurremember · August 23, 2015

        Haha. I am not a Lord but where do you want to start?

        You will find a lord, though his tardis maybe different. Or non existing

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      • Imran Ali · August 24, 2015

        I love kafka’s Arabs and jackals

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      • Unraveling mystery · August 24, 2015

        great!
        -S

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  4. thefeatheredsleep · July 16, 2015

    Love

    Liked by 1 person

  5. opashofi · July 15, 2015

    Very nice!! Love it 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  6. oledphatnuglee · July 15, 2015

    Drowning isn’t so bad, once you quit struggling the rest was amazingly peaceful.

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    • Unraveling mystery · July 15, 2015

      True… Thank you,O!
      -S

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      • oledphatnuglee · July 15, 2015

        Being brought back to life once you’ve felt the peace of death… now that is extremely painful and horrifying, still, it’s kinda nice being around.

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      • Unraveling mystery · July 15, 2015

        That makes you value your life more
        -S

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      • oledphatnuglee · July 15, 2015

        Actually, it set me free because I don’t fear death.

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      • Unraveling mystery · July 15, 2015

        Me too … Death is…well just a professional hazard 😜😜😜
        -S

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  7. Himali Shah · July 15, 2015

    Lovely S ❤

    Liked by 2 people

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